Wednesday 21 October 2015

My Best Piece Of Writing

My writing goal is to use different story structure in my writing. I wrote this story for my dad because he likes adventures. I laid it out using paragraphs and whenever someone new is speaking I enter down one line. Does it make sense? Does my writing have enough paragraphs?
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  1. Anonymous1 November 2015 at 21:42

    This is a fantastic story Ethan. You have thought carefully about the structure of a narrative. You have described your characters in the beginning, created a problem and a solution. You have worked hard on your goals and are recognising when a new dialogue needs a new line. Great learning. I am looking forward to the next adventure. From Mrs O.

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  2. Unknown9 November 2015 at 15:02

    Hi Ethan, just catching up on your blog and enjoyed the story very much. I could get used to being Father in case you were wondering. :) Keep up the great work.

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  3. Unknown9 November 2015 at 15:02

    Hi Ethan, just catching up on your blog and enjoyed the story very much. I could get used to being Father in case you were wondering. :) Keep up the great work.

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