Tuesday, 6 May 2014

My holiday story

 I have started to use great verbs and wow words and speech marks

Wednesday, 16 April 2014

Our Play

My part in the play was the fridge but it was hard to help my group with no one noticing me

Nikk and Ethan's Sandpit experience

Tuesday, 15 April 2014

Lloyd's birthday

First I had not enough details but I went back and aded more details to make my writing more interesting we use magnifying glass to find details. Can you spot my glasses?